and when i would be thinking
what is it to be at nowhere
shaken by facts,grounded by myths
i would turn to you
while you look away
i will come close,with grace..
while you still keep that pace
kill me once
kill me twice
show me all that i have become in your eyes..
turn away but please dont go
you are the one
today..and tomorrow
when my soul feels glad
and a little perplexed
take me on those long rides
those which our destinies decide
take me out of my own circles
or just stare
like you do.
timeless you have become to me
and again i clarify
blank you are,
blank is what i will always be
Saturday, September 29, 2007
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7 comments:
beautiful
sometimes even a complete blankness is worth craving for
I read it once, the last two lines gave it a whole new meaning, so read read it the second time...You must have been some dedicated sufi saint in your last life...
That was legendary.. or quite close to it
i see i see... purple deepens it is .. and of course you yourself have been away ....i write as regularly as i can, actually i have three blogs .. mortarbled is the one i frequent least.
yes Ekta of the wonderful name, once again so good of you to have dropped by.
i have a freind whose name when trasnlated becomes
´´ colourless obstacle the man of all colours and none ´´
anyway.. i am happy that you yourself are back. i am reading marquez´s short stories these days.
shakir
and the voyage to blankness in your poem is beautifully measured out. i love the perplexity that you bring in to keep the gladness in place...
i hope your absence will bring stil mroe into your poetry.
Fantabulous doesn't begin to cover it.
Anyone would hate the idea of killing you,btw :P
Loved it.
muaah.
truly straight from heart..this is what happens when u can hide ur true self..its all spilled here..
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