I opened my eyes to an eternally stretched sea that's narrating mildly its eternal glory..The blue in the water drifting to white..like consuming all to nothing.
The soothing air over my eyelashes,touching every core of my heart..and my mind wanders all over again...Why do I want to sink into this eternal silence that's gonna last only a while longer? why do i think my end would be as dim and insignificant as the light of my maid's room? Why do i want to die cause am done and content? what is done and content? Why am i at peace with only questions on my mind?
Calmly disturbed..i open my eyes,smiling heartfully..while shedding a tear.. and believing to fill the mighty blue waters..somehow..somewhere.
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12 comments:
the sea, it generates a hundred emotions and binds them into one-it questions an unforgiven heart.
while the tides take away a lot from the shore (inorder to carry them to the brighter sun), at the same time they dont leave the shore empty-they always leave somethings behind.
people often contemplate whether the tides guide one to a brighter life or to no man's land.
in the end its all about the way you want to believe.
i hope u believe for the better.
emotions put to words-very well indeed.
yeah true a 'poison coated elixir ' said they leave something behind..but they clean the shore take something with them n then they leave behind..those things left behind also is a part of some other shore
.The blue in the water drifting to white..like consuming all to nothing.
splendid..!!!!
but we can also say na that they are consuming 'nothingness' in everything..
why we want to sink..may b a moment of eternity..
its like living a life in slow motion in that moment..that moment bringing us to shore..
why we wanna die..well its an individual perspective..
n questions are sometimes the answers..they make us live..:)
u have done this post so well..justified it..
every ink drop here speaks of a phenomenon..gr8!
oye , i dont hv so much time to read it , but then it must b good , keep it up
@poison coated elixir
"while the tides take away a lot from the shore (inorder to carry them to the brighter sun), at the same time they dont leave the shore empty-they always leave somethings behind."
such a nice thought.
@ myself
I wonder how it would feel to be nowhere,nowhere at all..wonder how would it be.
@ poison coated elixir
thanks for your words :)
@ Vijay
:) i shall keep it up.
@ dreamcatcher
"but we can also say na that they are consuming 'nothingness' in everything.."
feels brilliant! woww!! damn it.
and thanks so much for reading it.Feels good :)
:) feels good the way u write..keep it up :)...i will be around ma'm
u wonder how it would be to be nowehere at all, to be nothing?
but then read dreamcatcher's comment and ur own acceptance:
the waves/tides consume the nothingness too !! ;)
the last line is murder.. the use of '' somewhere'' infuses it with a lyricism truer than the ocean.
and are you a deep purple fan ? i noticed the colours on your site....i am a big king crimson and uriah heep fan .. anyway
thank you for visiting. your comments meant a lot to me.
best,
shakir
@crimsonflaw
"lyricism truer than ocean" thats so elevating.thanks. :)
not a "deep purple" fan (referrin to the band) but obssessed with the idea of purple.
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